Feedback and Oops 0108 2005

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Feedback and Oops 0108 2005

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Feedback and Oops 0108 2005

【Feedback】Good hosting but there are some points for improvement.
1. 會員請準時出席;主持人最好提前5~10分鐘抵達招呼來賓。
2. 會員請自行印討論的內容;主持人最好印一些備份以供新會員閱讀。
3. 主持人宜準備點餐單(Tiffany設計的,可從網站下載:http://tw.club.yahoo.com/clubs/yoyoenglishclub/)

【Oops】
…to people I care, even THE STRANGERS, like THE RECENTLY ISSUE ABOUT the tsunami occurred in south Asia (X)
…to people I care, STRANGERS, like THOSE WHO SUFFEREED FROM the RECENT tsunami DISASTER THAT occurred in south Asia (O)

I always have new wish. (X)
I always have A new wish. (O)

learning HOW TO BE IN successful relationships by experiencing everything directly is always A GREAT TOPIC… (X)
learning TO KEEP successful relationships by experiencing everything directly is always AN IMPORTANT TOPIC… (O)

…that we can discuss and SHARE EACH OTHER (X)
…that we can discuss and SHARE WITH EACH OTHER (O)

BECAUSE OF NEW YEAR, share your wish TO the members in your group. (X)
AT THE START OF THE NEW YEAR, share your wish WITH the members in your group. (O)

Share THE opinion about the tsunami. (X)
Share YOUR opinion about the tsunami. (O)

Please pick one or 2 kinds of RELATIONSHIP and describe WHY IT MEANS to you. (X)
Please pick one or TWO kinds of RELATIONSHIPS and describe WHAT THEY MEAN to you. (O)

Describe the ideal RELATIONSHIP you expect WITH your family, friends, AND lovers. (X)
Describe the ideal RELATIONSHIP you expect IN your family, friends, OR lovers. (O)
Describe the ideal RELATIONSHIPS you expect IN your family, friends, AND lovers. (O)


You don’t look your age. (X)
You don’t look LIKE your age. (X)

I want to study FINANCIAL. (X)
I want to study FINANCE. (O)

You’ll receive degree after you GRADUATE. (X)
You’ll receive THE/YOUR degree after you FINISH COURSES AND EXAMS/THESIS/PROJECT. (O)

We are AT the same age. (X)
We are OF the same age. (O)

I JOINED YOYO Club FOR more than one year. (X)
I HAVE JOINED YOYO Club FOR more than one year. (X)
I JOINED YOYO Club more than one year AGO. (O)

I STUDIED FOR communication policy. (X)
I STUDIED communication policy. (O)

Many ENGLISH DEAD IN tsunami. (X)
Many BRITISH VISITORS DIED FROM THE tsunami. (O)

I keep MY MIND YOUNGER. (?)
I keep A YOUNG MIND/HEART. (O)

I’m considering TO FIND ANOTHER NEW job. (X)
I’m considering FINDING ANOTHER job. (O)
I’m considering FINDING NEW job. (O)

【Vocabulary】
讀學分班: take credit courses
恆心: persistence;perseverance
孝順父母: respect parents and serve them with love;practice filial piety towards one’s parents
販賣兒童: child trafficking
Knowledge is power -- when shared.
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